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Monday, 6 June 2016

All about me

Hi everyone, we will be getting our own individual learning blogs soon. This is what our first blog post will look like.

31 comments:

  1. hello and Greetings to you all i first would like to say you guy's have done a good job telling us a bit about yourself. :)

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  2. Hi EHS my name is Jorja I am from Kaniere School. I like the way you added in a lot of colorful words in your All About Me. I like it because I like all different types of colour too. I have done a All About Me poster before. Next time you might want to use paragraphs for each thing you like.

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  3. Hi EHS Learners.
    My name is Mariah and I am from Kaniere School
    I like your All About Me poster because Room 2 did a All About Me poster.Maybe next time you can cheak your words and backgrounds because we can't see some of the words and it was good.

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  5. Hi my name is Alicia from Kaniere school.
    Great job to all of you on your All About Me. I like how you put how old you are because if you did not you would not now how old you were. Maybe next time you could add in some more pictures.

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  7. Hello EHS Learners.
    My name is Maddison and I am from Kaniere School.
    I like the way you have told us a lot of information because it is hard to describe things.
    Do you do most of your work on chromebooks?

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  9. Hi EHS Learners my name is Connor and I go to Kaniere School. I saw that some people in your school play video games, I do too :) . Another thing I saw was that some people made spelling mistakes so be careful with that.

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  10. Hi EHS laerners my name is Billy
    I like that you have made a slide for your All About Me. This is cool because you are writing about you.It was great to see the photos of you so I know what you look like..

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  11. Hi EHS Learners my name is Maddy from Kaniere School. Your work is very good because you can just use the arrow to go to the next slide. Some of you don't have capital letters and spaces after your full stops though.

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  12. Hello EHS learners it is Aaron here from Kaniere School. When I was reading I read that people play video games no surprise there because I do too. I saw that some people made spelling mistakes like: I i and Ragbe next time make sure you re - read.

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  13. Hi EHS Learners my name is Maddy from Kaniere School. Your work is very good because you can just use the arrow to go to the next slide. Some of you don't have capital letters and spaces after your full stops though.

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  14. Hi EHS Learners my name is Abby from Kaniere School. I like the way you have presented the All About Me.Next time you could go and cheek your spelling.

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  15. Hi EHS laerners my name is Billy
    I like that you have made a slide for your All About Me. This is cool because you are writing about you.It was great to see the photos of you so I know what you look like..

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  16. Hi Guys. My name is Corbin I am from Kaniere School I liked your work because there is a lot to read about you all and you have added in some detail. It is the best. You get a A+++++

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  17. Hello EHS School my name is Liam and I am from Kaniere School. I like your All About Me because it has a lot of detail in it. We did a All About Me once and you can see that on our blog.

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  18. Hi Peuma, Sam here, I go to Kaniere School.
    I like GTA 5 too. Awesome poster.
    You could work on doing a capital I, not a lowercase i.

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  19. Hello EHS Learners
    My name is Freya from Kaniere School
    I like the way you all have told us a bit about your selves.
    Maybe next time you all could cheek your work and fix your I's and words.
    Keep up the good work EHS Learners!!!!!!!

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  20. Hello EHS Learners my name is Jayden. I like how you had a slide each to put same Writing in.
    Well done EHS it is cool.

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  21. Hello EHS Learners
    My name is Freya from Kaniere School
    I like the way you all have told us a bit about your selves.
    Maybe next time you all could cheek your work and fix your I's and words.
    Keep up the good work EHS Learners!!!!!!!

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  22. Hi EHS Learners my name is Isabel and I go to Kaniere. I like how you put in detail because it shows me a bit about your self. I think you need to work on your capital letters.

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  23. Hi EHS leaners it's Preston from Kaniere School. I like the way you have got a slide for everyone. How long did this take to make.

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  24. Hi this is Luca, I go to Kaniere School. I like your Work because you have cool photos and backgrounds. Next time you need to cheek your work for spelling. I forget theis to sometimes.

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  25. Hi EHS learners my name is Thomas and I am from Kaniere School my favorite all about me is Fetuli's because he likes rugby.

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  26. Hi EHS Learners it's Preston from Kaniere School. I like the way you have said what you like. How long did it take to make?

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  27. Hi EHS Learners it's Tyler from Kaniere School.I like how you have done a lot of work on this.How long did this take to make?

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  28. Hi EHS Learners my name is Preston from Kaniere school. I love the way you have the New Zealand flag. How long did this presentation take to make.

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  29. Hi EHS Learners it's Corbin from Kaniere School.I like your work it's the best work ever you get a A+

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  30. HI my name is Latoiya im from Gilberthorpe school.
    I enjoyed the part were you were talking about yourself.
    You taught me to remember to use capital letters
    Next time you could remember to use more capital letters.

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