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Thursday 2 June 2016

Setting

Walt: describe a setting / place. This is our first attempt at planning and writing about a setting using our senses.

8 comments:

  1. Hi Sam from Kaniere School.
    I like your photos and the font you used because it is easy to read.
    Next time after you do a full stop you could do a space.

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  2. Hi Sam from Kaniere School.
    I like your photos and the font you used because it is easy to read.
    Next time after you do a full stop you could do a space.

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  4. Great job with your work EHS Learners!
    I like the way how you put in full stops at the end of every sentence.
    I like the way your writing is based on your setting!

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  5. Hi EHS Learners my name is Abby from Kaniere School. I like the way you have describe the photo. Next time you could change the font on some because it was had to read.

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  6. Hi EHS Learners my name is Thomas and I am from Kaniere School. I like the way your class have used playgrounds. I like the pictures of the playgrounds they look fun to play on. Was it easy to choose a photo

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  7. Hi EHS Learners my name is Jayden and I am from Kaniere School I like the way you have used playgrounds. They look fun to play on. And the beach.

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  8. Hi Luca here from Kaniere School.
    I Like Your WrIting.

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